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FullMoonWSagash Trio -spoiler- by ~Katriona-Seallach:iconKatriona-Seallach:


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Submitted: June 18, 2007
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Be gentle. This is my first attempt at a manga-style sketch.

And WARNING this is a big spoiler for "Full Moon wo Sagashite" and I do not want to ruin the ending at all for anyone (because it's WAY too good)! So stop looking/reading now if you haven't seen the ending!! Really! I mean it!

I just finished watching Full Moon wo Sagashite for the first time a couple days ago, and loved it, and was inspired to take a whack at at doing some fan-art from it. For my first try I'm pretty happy. I mean, you can tell who everyone is, right? ^^;

I'm way open to constructive, supportive feedback on how I can better my talent at this style, but this is my first try at it, so be nice... I know their hands are too small :doh:

EDIT: (06-27-07) having received some great feedback, I've made a couple little changes to Takuto's and Mitsuki's eye placement. I think it's better... Hands are still too small... must fix that next...

Disclaimer: not my characters, but is my art! Respect other's work and copyright law by not stealing art! Art thieves will be fed to the dragon. Thanks! :-)
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weeee thats cute! i like the perspective! the wings are cute tooooooo :heart:
Thanks! :D I can't believe I drew *inaccurate* wings, but that's how they are in the anime so... yeah, and it's a cute anime, too :D

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You did well. Usually first attempts of manga style don't end up very well, but this did. Good job.

~Lukki

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awws! i like it though its cute and the wings are cool anyway :-)
Thanks!

Do you have any suggestions as to what I could do better / how to get better (besides practice, duh)? I'm open to feedback... if you want to... don't have to...

Thanks again! :-) :thanks:

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You're welcome.

Nah, you're already so good at it that one can say there's something, but can't really put a finger on it. If I really had to make a guess, I'd say eyes. They often cause some trouble in my experience.

~Lukki

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Thanks for the (additional) feedback. I appreciate it. :-)

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Wow! I don't know this anime, but that's really cool! The eyes are a little bit off in my opinion. Many anime characters have so damn big eyes, and it's quite difficult to get them right mainly because of their size.

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Thanks. :D
I hope I didn't spoil the ending for you. Full Moon is a really great Anime.

Can you be more specific on how the eyes are off? Too big? Wrong shape? Wrong highlights? I got a reference from the actual manga of the series for Takuto (the fella) but then used references from the anime for Meroko and Mitsuki (the gals). I feel like Takuto's eyes are right on with the manga, but Mitsuki's feel the weakest to me (she's the non-winged female).

Thanks for the compliments straight from an expert. :thanks:

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